In his house at R'lyeh, dead Cthulhu waits dreaming.

Silo first, second, third drafts done

Left the first copy with a friend and colleague who inspired the story.

He said this:

I found your short story today. You do a great job with detail. After seeing that 60 Minutes episode, it is clear to me that you captured the essence of our fucked up government, and that you are a talented writer as well. I would like to say that the story is all sci-fi, but you are probably too close to reality.

which was nice to hear.

Then I sent it to a friend to edit, took feedback and changed some order and structural elements. Then I posted it at a writing community, took feedback and changed some more structural elements. And now I’ve gone through again for even more edits. I’m about ready to close the book on this story and move on to something else.

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